Generating Financial Commentary
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Financial Commentary - Q3 2024 Results
**Executive Summary**
Revenue increased 12% to $45M driven by strong demand in core markets, while adjusted EBITDA margin compressed 150bps to 18.5% due to planned investment in R&D and higher input costs.
**Revenue Analysis**
- Total revenue: $45.0M vs $40.2M prior year (+12%)
- Organic growth: +8%, acquisition contribution: +4%
- Core product lines grew 15%, offset by 5% decline in legacy products
- Volume up 10%, price realization contributed 2%
Workflow
Progress:
- Gather financial data (actuals, budget, prior year)
- Calculate key variances and percentages
- Identify 3-5 main performance drivers
- Separate one-time from recurring items
- Draft executive summary (pyramid principle)
- Write detailed variance explanations
- Add forward-looking commentary
- Include required disclaimers
- Lead with conclusions - Start with overall performance assessment
- Quantify everything - Every claim needs supporting numbers
- Structure by importance - Most material items first
- Explain the "why" - Link financial results to business activities
- Address outlook - Include forward-looking context with appropriate caveats
Examples
Example 1: Input: Revenue $50M (budget $48M, PY $45M), Gross margin 65% (budget 68%, PY 70%) Output: "Revenue of $50M exceeded budget by 4% and increased 11% year-over-year, driven primarily by 15% volume growth in our premium product segment. Gross margin of 65% declined 500bps from prior year due to elevated raw material costs (+300bps impact) and product mix shift toward lower-margin offerings (+200bps impact), partially offset by pricing actions implemented in Q2."
Example 2: Input: EBITDA $8M including $1.2M restructuring charge, PY $9.5M Output: "Adjusted EBITDA of $9.2M (excluding $1.2M in restructuring charges) declined 3% from prior year, reflecting margin compression from inflationary pressures that more than offset the benefit of operational efficiency gains. The restructuring program is expected to generate $2M in annual savings beginning Q1 2025."
Best Practices
- Use active voice and present tense
- Avoid jargon; explain technical terms briefly
- Be specific: "increased 15%" not "increased significantly"
- Use consistent terminology throughout
- Executive Summary (2-3 sentences)
- Revenue Performance (volumes, pricing, mix)
- Margin Analysis (gross, operating, EBITDA)
- Key Drivers (market conditions, operational factors)
- Outlook (forward-looking with disclaimers)
- Always show absolute and relative changes
- Use basis points for margin changes over 100bps
- Round to meaningful precision (usually whole numbers or 10bps)
- Compare to both budget and prior year when available
Common Pitfalls
Don't:
- Bury key messages in details - lead with conclusions
- Use vague qualifiers ("somewhat higher", "relatively strong")
- Mix one-time and recurring items without clear separation
- Make forward-looking statements without disclaimers
- Explain away poor performance without acknowledging reality
- Use overly technical accounting language
- Present data without business context
Disclaimer Template: "Forward-looking statements involve risks and uncertainties that may cause actual results to differ materially from those projected. These statements should be considered in conjunction with cautionary statements in our SEC filings."