Writing Comparison Pages
Structure every comparison page around this ratio: 70% "here's how we think differently" vs 30% direct feature comparison. Never spend more than one sentence disparaging a competitor's weakness — state the fact, then pivot immediately to your differentiation.
Bad: "Competitor X is clunky, outdated, and their support team is notoriously unresponsive."
Good: "Competitor X is built for enterprise IT teams running complex workflows. We built [Product] for small teams who need to ship in days, not months."
Progress:
- Identify the real buyer question behind the comparison ("which one is right for me" not "which one is better")
- List 3-5 genuine differentiators (not marketing fluff — actual product/philosophy differences)
- Write a neutral positioning statement for the competitor
- Build comparison table with factual, verifiable claims only
- Add "choose us if / choose them if" section
- Remove any adjectives that wouldn't survive a public fact-check
- Have someone unfamiliar with the product read it and flag anything that feels like bashing
Step-by-step:
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Start with the buyer's job-to-be-done, not the competitor's flaws. Open with "If you're evaluating X and Y, here's how to think about it" rather than "Why X beats Y."
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Describe the competitor accurately first. State what they're good at and who they're built for. This builds trust and makes your differentiation credible.
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Differentiate on philosophy/approach, not just features. Feature checklists age badly and invite nitpicking. "We optimize for speed of setup; they optimize for depth of customization" is more durable than "We have 12 integrations, they have 8."
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Use a comparison table for facts, not opinions. Pricing, platform support, integration counts — verifiable things. Keep subjective claims in prose where they can carry nuance.
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Add a "choose them if" section. Explicitly naming scenarios where the competitor is the better choice is the single strongest trust signal on the page. It also pre-qualifies leads, reducing churn.
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End with proof, not claims. Customer quotes, migration stories, or trial CTAs — not another round of "we're better because."
Example 1: Input: "Write a comparison section against [Competitor], a legacy project management tool, for our modern lightweight alternative."
Output:
[Competitor] vs [Product]: Which fits your team?
[Competitor] has been the standard for project management at large organizations for over a decade, with deep customization and admin controls built for IT-managed rollouts.
[Product] was built for small, fast-moving teams who want to be running projects in minutes, not after a weeks-long implementation.
Choose [Competitor] if: you need granular permission structures, have a dedicated admin to manage the tool, or are standardizing across a 500+ person org.
Choose [Product] if: you're a team of 2-50, want to self-serve onboarding, and prioritize speed over configurability.
Example 2: Input: "They're slower and their UI looks dated — can we say that?"
Output: Reframe as fact + context, not insult: "[Competitor]'s interface reflects its enterprise roots — built for dense data views across large teams. If you want a lighter, more visual workflow, that's where [Product] differs." Avoid "dated" or "slower" as standalone adjectives; if speed is a real, measurable differentiator, cite a benchmark instead of asserting it.
- Every negative claim about a competitor must be factual and sourceable — assume it will be screenshotted and sent to their team.
- Write as if the competitor's CEO will read the page. Would they call it unfair?
- Lead with who the competitor is good for before explaining who you're better for.
- Use data (benchmarks, pricing, G2 scores) over adjectives.
- Keep a repeatable template across all comparison pages so tone stays consistent.
- Update comparison pages regularly — stale claims about a competitor's missing features erode trust fast when they ship that feature.
- Adjective stacking: "slow, clunky, expensive, outdated" — any list of unverified adjectives reads as bashing, not analysis.
- Strawmanning: comparing your best feature to their worst, or your current product to their outdated screenshots.
- Omitting "choose them if": a comparison page with zero scenarios favoring the competitor looks like propaganda, not guidance.
- Legal/factual risk: unverified claims about pricing, security, or performance can create real liability — verify before publishing.
- Over-indexing on features: feature-for-feature tables go stale fast and invite "well actually" pushback; philosophy/positioning differentiation ages better.
- No clear CTA beyond "we're better": always end with a next step (trial, demo, migration guide) rather than more comparison.